Could anybody me write two body paragraphs ! this is my introduction.

thousands of people get hurt from playing sports each year. some of these sports can be dangerous, such as football, horse riding, soccer, and so on. in soccer, you might trip and sprain a leg. in horse riding, you can fall off at any time and break a bone, your back, or worse. playing football, a high contact sport, an accident might happen, and you could even get brain damage. i could go on and on, but there is so many to list. these can have a huge impact on you. “stop sport injuries” state that over 3.5 million kids under 14, have had to receive treatment from sport injuries. from football to even hockey, people can get seriously hurt. so, teens and children should always be limited to these sports, proper safety and caution should be exercised, and at the very least be under supervision.

I can't help you write 2 body paragraphs, but I can give you some tips on how to revise your intro.

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Try not to add your evidence in your introduction. Your thesis statement is good. When ending lists, don't use "and so on." It happens a lot in writing and makes your piece sound unprofessional. You can just end the list at soccer.

now, of course, the quality and the seasonability of these winter dreams varied, but the stuff of them remained.   they persuaded dexter several years later to pass up a business course at the state university—his father, prospering now, would have paid his way—for the precarious advantage of attending an older and more famous university in the east, where he was bothered by his scanty funds. but do not get the impression, because his winter dreams happened to be concerned at first with musings on the rich, that there was anything merely snobbish in the boy. he wanted not association with glittering things and glittering people—he wanted the glittering things themselves. often he reached out for the best without knowing why he wanted it—and sometimes he ran up against the mysterious denials and prohibitions in which life indulges.

there you go thats what we are missing

"the monkey's paw" is a rare story in that the theme is actually stated in the story. sgt. maj. morris tells the whites that the old fakir who put the spell on the paw said, "fate rules people's lives and those who interfere with fate do so to their sorrow." the message is a warning, but mr. white doesn't believe it. even though sgt. maj. morris makes it clear that he tried wishing with unfortunate results and he tries to throw the paw on the fire,   mr. white makes a wish for 200 pounds only to find that he receives the money when herbert dies in a factory accident. according to the fakir, then, because mr. white had wished for something he should not have had, his son lost his life.

the second wish that mrs. white encourages him to make is for herbert's return--one week after his death. when the strange knocking begins at the door during the windy night, mr. white panicks, believing that the previously dead but still mangled herbert could have walked home from the cemetary and is now at the door. because he fears what his wife will find if she opens the door, mr. white makes his third wish--for the noise to stop.

therefore, he uses his three wishes and to his sorrow, loses his son and disappoints his wife, who fervently believed that their son was at the door. she wanted him back, regardless of his condition.

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