Ineed a body paragraph following this introduction. just one.

thousands of people get hurt from playing sports each year. some of these sports can be dangerous, such as football, horse riding, soccer, and so on. in soccer, you might trip and sprain a leg. in horse riding, you can fall off at any time and break a bone, your back, or worse. playing football, a high contact sport, an accident might happen, and you could even get brain damage. i could go on and on, but there is so many to list. these can have a huge impact on you. “stop sport injuries” state that over 3.5 million kids under 14, have had to receive treatment from sport injuries. from football to even hockey, people can get seriously hurt. so, teens and children should always be limited to these sports, proper safety and caution should be exercised, and at the very least be under supervision.

I think you should cut out “Stop Sport Injuries” state that over 3.5 million kids under 14, have had to receive treatment from sport injuries. From football to even hockey, people can get seriously hurt. So, teens and children should always be limited to these sports, proper safety and caution should be exercised, and at the very least be under supervision."

This could be the start of your body:

“Stop Sport Injuries” state that over 3.5 million kids under 14, have had to receive treatment from sport injuries. From football to even hockey, people can get seriously hurt. So, teens and children should always be limited to these sports, proper safety and caution should be exercised, and at the very least be under supervision. People lose there loved ones to sports accidents everyday all over the world, and people can no longer bare it. People are making a stand. We should limit the amountof sports that are being played. If someone were to survive a sports accident, they can still be seriously injured to where they can no longer do every day things like walking or even putting on there own clothes.

I hope this helps! Please let me know!!!

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adding more details about the struggle rainsford experiences as he swims to the shore

c, his tragic flaw to cause his downfall