Read the paraphrase of the story henrique wrote. the soldiers walked through the rain as they approached the canyon. they’d been traveling for days to reach the dragon’s lair. finally they arrived. then the dragon approached, and it roared. yet, the soldiers faced off with the dragon, despite the noise. which is the best critique explaining why henrique should revise the paraphrase? henrique needs to change the sequence of events to be in a logical order. henrique needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive. henrique needs to add some dialogue to make the point of view consistent. henrique needs to change the point of view to make the sequence clearer.

explanation:

you only need simple sentences to answer this. just answer these questions.

what do you think annie thinks of the mother? do you think annie believes the mother is a fit mother for helen.

what about the father? what would annie think of him? she might not like him, but does she respect him.

how about the son? would annie think he is the only voice of sanity in an insane place?

what about helen herself? this is the key question. how does she see helen? what do you suppose she thought her first job was going to be.

these aren't hard questions. just state the obvious. annie is not that well educated: she just knows what she has to do. write it that way.

you can do it if you've read the book or seen the play or movie.

the answer would be c