How does the diction of this passage best supports the tone?

Iam awful at english and am so confused sos ignore the completely wrong diagram above

Read this sentence from "the wife's lament

Hurry i'll give 20 pts and a to whoever will comment first hurry no coying compares how both dickinson and shelley use form - lines, capitalization, and punctuation - to bring meaning to the poems "will there really be a 'morning'? ", "i dwell in possibility", and "ozymandias".