How do i make this sentence more interesting or appealing?
i visited numerous doctors, but they couldn’t pinpoint what the issue is so my parents and i traveled to (some random country ignore this part )to consult doctors there.

I frequented numerous specialist, but the issue is so severe and medically unknown, even the best doctors could not pinpoint what sort of illness had forced its way through my body; constantly I was in excruciating pain to the point where my parents had enough, and booked plane tickets to ___,  and we made appointments to consult with every high grade doctor in the area.

Explanation:

This actually might be too much, but try going on a Thesaurus to search for more attention grabbing words. Use explanations to the situation to make it more interesting to read.

b)metaphor

explanation:

when reading the sentence carefully it says,"hope is a thing with feathers" it's like saying: hope is a thing like feathers

get what i'm saying? instead of using a smilie like or as they use "with"

it would be nice enough if i got .