Examine the following paragraph for errors;
then create a revised paragraph without errors.
rita’s favorite place in the world is the beach. it is a magical place full of life everything is in motion from the ferris wheel to the waves. the waves never cease pounding, the shore as the sands shift and reshape the world. an endless array of activities invite every day there’s snorkeling, surfing, and crabbing to name just a few. a miracle each day. it is her favorite place to share with friends and family.

Rita’s most favourite place in the world is the beach, a magical place full of life. Everything is in motion there, from the ferris wheel and the unceasingly pounding waves to the shores’ sand shifting back and fourth due to the tides. Beaches present a myriad of activities such as: snorkelling, surging and crabbing. Each day at the Beach with her friends and family is a miracle.
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Ok! So Beach is a noun, meaning it needs to be capitalized. (person place or thing. In this case a place) therefore a noun.

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