Write a long term(1-3 years) smart goal for your future. then explain how you’ll achieve it

my smart goal is to get all a's and b's for the next 3 years.

explanation:

i will achive this goal by studying 3-4 times a week for 30+ minutes. i will also think about potential exam questions. i will never study up to the last minute. because that creates pressure in the final hours before a test. ill also develop good time management that way i never feel rushed or overwhelmed with work. i will make sure i keep my papers and assignments organized, and always turn in work ontime.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

one is a red flower, and one is the sky when the sun sets.