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which sentence from the paragraph best supports the idea
that this paragraph belongs in the middle of sora's essay?
read the paragraph from sora's narrative essay
that day after practice, i was frustrated and stomped
home. in fact, i'm embarrassed to say i sulked for the rest
of the day. then my stubborn streak kicked in, and i
decided that failure wasn't an option. i practiced regularly
until the day came when i was able to consistently hit the
ball
that day after practice, i was frustrated and stomped
home.
in fact, i'm embarrassed to say i sulked for the rest of
the day
then my stubborn streak kicked in, and i decided that
failure wasn't an option
practiced regularly until the day came when i was able
to consistently hit the ball

different routes can lead to sammy to different places, with different roads.   if you check a map, you can see the routes.   try to make connections of the places and count how many there are.   hope this : )

i'm sorry faith, i dont know how to you on this if you have any other questions hmu okay?

to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.