“the pedestrian” you wre going to comb through the story and record all the specific details about the setting you can find. record the specific, detailed description, and what is being described

postive, comparative, superlative - good, better, best

recall how we defined nouns as words capable of having plurals and possessive endings. adjectives (and their first cousin, the adverb) also have a feature that distinguishes them. they come in three states. first, the raw adjective—in its positive state—merely describes the noun modified; it doesn’t care about how this particular person or thing stacks up against other members of the same noun class

the writer needs to avoid using abbreviations and check spelling before sharing.

i’m confused as to what your asking ?