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shania is writing an expository essay about drive-in restaurants. read the following
paragraph from her essay.
1) these restaurants were essentially a kitchen and serving area, surrounded by
a large parking lot. 2) "carhops," as the servers were called, brought food out to
patrons sitting in the comfort and privacy of their cars. 3) holding aloft trays of
burgers and root beer, carhops used roller skates to zip between the kitchen and the
cars quickly. 4) in the 1950s, drive-in restaurants became popular and changed the
way people ate out. 5) some drive-in restaurants, like sonic, still exist today.
how could shania improve the organization of the paragraph?
move sentence 4 to the beginning to serve as the topic sentence
move sentence 1 to the end of the paragraph to provide a conclusion
reverse the order of sentence 2 and sentence 3
delete sentence 5 because it is unrelated to the overall topic