Language development: conventions and style
identity the choice that best answers the question
read this sentence and think about how it could be expressed more clearly
at the constitutional convention, james madison sat down front; he took notes on the discussions, between meetings, he transcribed the
notes
which of the following revisions incorporates parallelism most effectively?
a at the constitutional convention, james madison sat and took notes down front and between meetings, transcribed the notes.
b. at the constitutional convention, james madison sat down front, took notes on the discussions, and transcribed the notes betwee
meetings
c
at the constitutional convention, james madison sat down front, and he took notes on the discussions and transcribed the notes
between meetings
d. at the constitutional convention, james madison sat and took notes on the discussions down front, and he transcribed the notes
between meetings.

c. spelling errors, if not i am so sorry. but i hope it !

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

it would be b.) because if you process of elimination and when mr.white pulls the monkey it’s the action of the whole story

explanation:

the purpose is to inform because for some reason they really want you to know about it.