Read the word in parentheses; then decide which of these sentences most effectively translates an
abstract concept into a mental picture.
a. (sunrise) the rising sun transformed the canyon into bright stone and deep shadow.
b. (freedom) on her twenty-first birthday, lola declared herself a woman.
c. (studious) lucy lay on her bed reading a back issue of national geographic.
d. (rumors) whispers of doubt filled the empty halls like the reek of boiled cabbage.

to gain popularity at school, fitzgerald wrote plays for the school and cast himself as the star. he also joined one of the universitys most prestigious clubs.

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.