How can self-disclosure during a public presentation?

Self-disclosure can help during a public presentation by persuading the audience with the implementation of ethos as a mode of persuasion. When the speaker opens up about his views, feelings, and ideas to the audience, he is sharing pieces of him which they can relate to. In Greek language, ethos means ethics or character. In this type of persuasion, the audience are convinced by the speaker's credibility of character which proves his worth as a credible source of information. 

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

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Ithink she called him it