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what is the motivation of the new government?
the new government is made up of the pigs because they “were generally recognised as being the cleverest of the animals” (35). they are motivated by extra milk and apples. this is said to “‘preserve [their] health’” (52).

The new government is made up of the pigs because they “were generally recognised as being the cleverest of the animals” (35). They are motivated by extra milk and apples. This is said to “‘preserve [their] health’” (52).

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The motivation of the new government are the pigs since they "were generally recognized as being the cleverest of the animals" (35). According to the text, pigs are usually motivated with extra milk and apples and this "preserve (their) health" (52). The pigs are happy with getting extra milk and apples and it's healthy for them, so it's a win-win situation for their health and their satisfaction.

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um, what am i suppose to answer here? it just said that he will studied hared because of a grade in spanish.