Revise this. i think ive been doing it wrong i just need to see if im doing it right.
whenever i’m getting reading to eat my cat is always at my feet at the stove i am always tripping over him and swearing at him nevertheless he is such a funny creature how many cats can eat artichokes correctly after all when my husband cooks the kitchen smells of strong erotic spices from what i have incorrectly called the middle east but now i refer to as south asian i didn’t know the difference and was embarrassed to realize i was referring to an actual incontinent incorrectly no matter how hard i try i haven’t been able to reproduce his best dishes but then he does have the benefit of spending most of his life in pakistan where do we get hour specialty spices i bet your wondering but to my surprise it hasn’t been difficult to find a decent ethnic grocery store all you need to do is look in the yellow pages hey theirs a novel idea you wouldn’t believe how fresh and inexpensive the foods at these stores are when we shop at our favorite store rhythms of india the owners know now us they often encourage us to buy the most recent shipment of goat meat i wasn’t really crazy about that curry but love makes you do crazy things like happily married people everywhere we compromise when it is about something

Whenever I’m getting reading to eat, my cat is always at my feet at the stove. I am always tripping over him and swearing at him, nevertheless he is such a funny creature. How many cats can eat artichokes correctly? After all when my husband cooks, the kitchen smells like strong erotic spices from what I have incorrectly called. The middle east, but now I refer to as South Asian. I didn’t know the difference, and was embarrassed to realize I was referring to an actual incontinent incorrectly. No matter how hard I try I haven’t been able to reproduce his best dishes, but he does have the benefit of spending most of his life in Pakistan. Where we get our specialty spices I bet your wondering, but to my surprise it hasn’t been difficult to find a decent ethnic grocery store. All you need to do is look in the yellow pages, and hey there's a novel idea you wouldn’t believe how fresh and inexpensive the foods at these stores are. When we shop at our favorite store ''Rhythms of India'' the owners know now us, they often encourage us to buy the most recent shipment of goat meat.

IF YOU READ IT ALTOGETHER THIS PART DOESN'T MAKE SENSE ⬇

 I wasn’t really crazy about that curry, but love makes you do crazy things like happily married people everywhere we compromise when it is about something

as you read the passage below, consider how dana gioia uses

evidence, such as facts or examples, to support claims.

reasoning to develop ideas and to connect claims and evidence.

stylistic or persuasive elements, such as word choice or appeals to emotion, to add power to the ideas expressed.

explanation: