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directions read the narrative (the picture below) and answer the questions that follow.

33. how might you rewrite sentence 3 to show correct use of punctuation?
a often siblings share the same facial features, eyes, noses, or smiles.
b often—siblings share the same facial features (eyes, noses, or smiles).
c often; siblings share the same facial features (eyes, noses, or smiles).
d often siblings share the same facial features—eyes, noses, or smiles.
34. which word correctly fills in the blank in sentence 4?
a look
b looking
c looked
d looks
35. how might you rewrite sentence 5 to show correct use of punctuation?
a smiling, annabelle followed the coach's instructions without correcting him.
b smiling, annabelle followed the coach's instructions, without correcting him.
c smiling; annabelle followed the coach's instructions, without correcting him.
d smiling; annabelle followed the coach's instructions without correcting him.
36. how should sentence 6 be rewritten?
a our coach did not even notice his mistake wrapped up in the demonstration he was giving.
b our coach was wrapped up in the demonstration he was giving did not even notice his mistake.
c wrapped up in the demonstration he was giving our coach did not even notice his mistake.
d our coach, wrapped up in the demonstration he was giving, did not even notice his mistake.
37. which word correctly fills in the blank in sentence 8?
a has
b haven't
c have
d had
38. which word correctly fills in the blank in sentence 11?
a is
b are
c was
d were
39. how should you rewrite sentence 13 to show correct use of punctuation?
a but more than anything else—we love going on long road trips, we drove all the way from chicago to miami one summer.
b but more than anything else; we love going on long road trips; we drove all the way from chicago to miami one summer.
c but; more than anything else, we love going on long road trips, we drove all the way from chicago to miami one summer.
d but more than anything else, we love going on long road trips—we drove all the way from chicago to miami one summer.
40. how might you rewrite sentence 16 to show the correct punctuation of a participle?
a looking out over the ocean; we practiced a new song, composed during the trip.
b looking out over the ocean we practiced a new song composed during the trip.
c looking out over the ocean we practiced a new song, composed during the trip.
d looking out over the ocean, we practiced a new song composed during the trip.
41. how should you punctuate sentence 18?
a to celebrate: we decided to take one last swim before we started our long drive home; after all—who knows when we'd see the ocean again?
b to celebrate, we decided to take one last swim before we started our long drive home; after all, who knows when we'd see the ocean again.
c to celebrate we decided to take one last swim before we started our long drive home: after all, who knows when we'd see the ocean again!
d to celebrate, we decided to take one last swim before we started our long drive home—after all, who knows when we'd see the ocean again?
42. how should you fill in the punctuation missing from sentence 20?
a !
b -
c —
d ?
43. how might you rewrite sentence 27?
a there in my guitar case were the keys.
b there, in my guitar case, is the keys.
c there in my guitar case are the keys.
d there, in my guitar case, was the keys.
44. which word correctly fills in the blank in sentence 28?
a astonish
b astonished
c astonishes
d astonishing


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