Read the following sentences.
1. in today's times, the notable leonardo da vinci is most known for his ability to paint wonderful pictures.
2. today, leonardo da vinci is most known for his skill in painting.
which improvements were used to revise sentence 1 into sentence 2?
a parallel structure
better placement of modifiers to reduce confusion
c. precise, concise word choice
a complex sentence structure

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