English, 02.11.2019 06:31 Z0D

What is the best way to revise this sentence so that it conveys clear, concise ideas and does not change the meaning of the sentence?

i rang the doorbell, but no one came to the door, and i was sure that this was the right address, so i waited, and then i saw a curtain move.

a. i rang the doorbell, and i saw a curtain move upstairs.
b. the curtains moved in the window the moment i rang the doorbell.
c. i was sure i was at the right address, but no one came when i rang the bell.
d. i rang the doorbell, but no one came to the door. i was sure this was the right address. while i waited, i saw a curtain move.

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