What should you consider when evaluating the credibility of a piece of literature based on voice and the choice of a narrator

What is the best way to improve the conclusion? add a sentence to the ending that summarizes the writer’s topic. add a sentence to the middle that reflects on the writer’s experiences. revise the final sentence to have a different tone. revise the first sentence to state a future goal.

In january 2014 and i started 1 million pennies project she put donation jars in school and shops and set up a webpage to of said donations online her gold was to collect 1 million pennies or 1000 chandra’s planned to give the money to a group called growing food for the group plant gardens and deliver the products it grows to people in need

Ok which of peter's lines shows that he is using personal experience to understand the reading?