8. craft and structure: how does the sentence beginning "for unlike my mother, i did not " connect to the first paragraph of the story? does this suggest that the conflict in the story is primarily internal or external?
based on the text, the conflict is based on the characters difference in opinions. the first four words " for unlike my mother," indicate an immediate difference in both of their opinions. the main character does not believe she could do anything she wanted to be, as this is stated in the past tense this could refer to a change in her mind. emotionally this character is pessimistic, where as the mother is open minded and optimistic making her the winner. overall this is a emotional conflict between a parent and a child who does not believe in themselves.

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explanation:

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1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

sorry, i just really need points. and to this question, maybe i know the answer. but i have no time now. d