4.4.4 test on apex i need on how the rewrite it

                                  1.Throughout most of this narrative, tension builds in the plot. However, the author fails to establish tension early in the story. Rewrite the bold section of this story so that there is tension at the outset of the narrative. (15 points)Bu . . . Bu . . . Bu. "Mommy, Mommy! Your phone's ringing! Mommy!"Suddenly, Shonda burst out of sleep. The buzzing was coming from her phone. She doesn’t usually expect phone calls during this time, frightened and curious to see who it is, she answered the phone."Hand Mommy the phone, baby," said Shonda as she pushed herself up in bed. The simple act of sitting up was getting harder and harder as the baby in her belly grew bigger and bigger

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