Iwill you! 20 points!

how can i minimize my story on a 3 page story, instead of a 4 page story. give me some ideas of stuff i should remove.

You can remove the part where your talking about how you feel invisible. You can just say she doesn't pay attention and things like that because in each sentence it just adds a description on how she doesn't pay attention so you can remove some of the sentences.

"get off of your lazy bum and come running with me or i'm dumping this pitcher of water on u " u say with a smile. she thinks your joking so she ignores you about 10 seconds later shes screaming wile water is dripping everywhere you say "here comes the second one! " then you here her say okay, your such a j e r k ! ill be ready in 5 put the pitcher down " she say in an angry tone. and you smile in victory

good enough?