Need more opinions. is there anything wrong with this poem? if there is anything wrong, point it out

this song is emotional, but not that blue,
i gave you my heart, now you have two.
i gave you my love, as did you,
it warms my heart, to know you love me too.

one day, under the full moon,
i wish to take your heart away, like a thieving goon,
through your gleaming eyes, gleaming crystal eyes,
you will see a diamond crystal, in a golden tie.

all i want from you, all i wish
is for you to say, " i love you too "

Read the excerpt below and answer the question. there was a moment, in time, and in this place, when my brother, or my mother, or my father, or my sister, had to convey to me, for example, the danger in which i was standing from the white man standing just behind me, and to convey this with a speed, and in a language, that the white man could not possibly understand, and that, indeed, he cannot understand, until today. he cannot afford to understand it. this understanding would reveal to him too much about himself, and smash that mirror before which he has been frozen for so long. this excerpt from "if black english isn't a language, then tell me, what is? " is significant because -select all that apply- hughes imagines himself as a black slave. hughes uses black english to emphasize his argument. hughes uses a historical example to explain the origins of language. hughes explains the significance that black english holds for white people.