Can anyone check my english paper grammar? (1 paragraph)

"this idea is further elucidated when gatsby compares daisy’s voice to money, saying “her voice is full of money,” “that was it. i’d never understood before. it was full of money—that was the inexhaustible charm that rose and fell in it, the jingle of it, the cymbals’ song of it…high in a white palace the king’s daughter, the golden girl…”. this is yet another example of daisy and the american dream being juxtaposed."