Can you guys revise little sis essay? i cant right because i am going to tutor my bff right now.

did you know you can survive a blizzard in hay fortress? a bale fortress is a fortress made out of bales of hay. another fact is that you also stay warm in a hay fortress too. in my opinion, fin and luc from the story “buried in a blizzard” are the most legendary characters. in the next paragraphs, i will tell you how fin and luc from “ buried in a blizzard” are the most legendary characters. in the next paragraph, the information that is shown will be in my opinion and detailed with evidence.

one of my reasons, they survived in a hay fortress. in the story “buried in a blizzard, “ fin’s gaze skimmed the barn, and then his eyes lit up. let's build a fort out of these bales. we'll be warmer inside it than this big barn.”. we can tell that pretty much see that the barn was them to protect them but didn't give any warmness inside, so, fin tries to think what they can so to warm them up and not freeze to death inside the barn. another example, “ inspired, they set to work, gathering the bales and stacking them to form an enclosed fort. they found old tarps and ropes and used them to form a roof over the bales. luc came up with the idea to use dry straw to cover their fort’s floor. then the two boys crawled inside through the opening and quickly covered it with the tarp.”. we can also tell that they were inspired by fin’s idea, so they used what they know, and also bales to make them warm and protect their self. i would never have an idea that creative if i was in a blizzard!

my second reason is that they were without any adults, according to in the story “ buried in the blizzard “, “as the two friends hurried along, they planned out how they would construct their own run with berms and a quarter pipe. they may not have been olympians, but they were scrappers who had fun trying new ways to bomb down the slope.” this tells us that went without an adult because, in the text, it doesn't say that they went with an adult, another example, “then, almost as quickly as it had started, the wind died. a low droning sound replaced the shrieking wind. as it became louder, they both recognized the sound. snowmobiles! furiously, the boys dug their way out of the drift that had formed across the opening of their fort and clambered out of the barn to wave down the snowmobilers. luc's dad and fin's uncle pulled up to the barn. they threw their arms around the boys, ecstatic to discover they survived the storm. as the boys recounted their adventures, the adults listened in amazement at the boys' cleverness and resourcefulness.” this also tells us when they were in the hay fortress, and heard the sound of snowmobiles, and when they got out, they found luc's and fin’s uncle, so this tells us that they were without any adults while in a blizzard until they got out. man, i would have rushed to the sound of snowmobiles because i would have been scared without being with an adult!

last but not least, my last reason they used what they had to survive while to wait for the storm out. according to the story “ buried in a blizzard”, “he snatched the two mugs they used for the cocoa and filled them with snow that was piled outside the tarp. then they melted the snow by placing the mugs close to their bodies. they played foot wars to keep the blood circulating in their feet and made up clapping games to keep their hands warm.”. this tells that they are using what they packed and what they know to stay warm, another example is this, “now i’m glad i was so hungry when i went hiking with my dad, luc said. why is that? because i’d never have thought to bring these supplies today. luc unzipped his backpack and whipped out a flashlight. “. this also tells that if he ever went hungry with the trip with his dad, he would never have thought he had to pack all of these things. i would have never thought about bringing that much stuff if i have never been in a case like that!

in conclusion, fin and luc had to survive a rough blizzard, but with their knowledge, they were able to survive the blizzard. in my opinion, fin and luc are legendary because first, they survived in a hay fortress,

second, they were without any adults, and last, they used what they had to survive while waiting for the storm out they had to stay the whole night. i guess it was quite tough for fin and luc!