Fill in the missing words: when revising, you are checking for ; when proofreading, you are checking

When revising, you are checking for organization; when proofreading, you are checking presentation, grammatical errors .

Revision and Proofreading are two important steps that are required before sending out a final draft of any written material. The purpose of both is to check if the material is correct in all aspects but they both cover different things. While revision is done on numerous drafts, proofreading is done on the final draft. Through revision, the person checks if the information is presented correctly and the draft is factually accurate. It allows the person to add something that wasn't mentioned before or to remove information which looks extra.

By revising a content, you check if the information is in a flow and nothing seems to pop up out of nowhere. Proofreading is done when the draft has gone through a final revision. This step is concentrates more on the details rather than the big picture. Errors of grammar such as adding/removing punctuation's, checking vocabulary, correcting citations and other details are checked and corrected through proofreading.

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