Choose one body paragraph from your informational article to revise.
copy this paragraph into a new document.
review your paragraph for coherence. make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
review your paragraph for correct english language conventions. correct any errors.
write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.
i chose this paragraph so , i'm very confused!
the deer population on komodo island is decreasing due to poachers. the effect of the decreasing deer population means less food for the dragons. this can be a problem because with less deer for the komodo dragons to eat, the further the komodo dragon has to hunt for food. which means that the komodo dragon must enter the villages and snatch the goats. this will cause major problems for both komodo dragons and townspeople.