Read the sentence from a student's essay about "the treasure of lemon brown."

greg has changed the way that he thinks about his father after he has spoken to lemon brown.

what is the best way to revise this sentence?

greg's feelings about his dad changed after lemon brown talks to him.

greg sees his father in a new light after lemon brown speaks to him.

greg appreciates his father more after his conversation with lemon brown.

greg's respect for his dad grew after he has spoken with lemon brown.

What are the adjectives in this sentence? our ancient car has became very unreliable recently,so we are trying to find a cheap replacement .

The best persuasive essay topics a.are the ones that are popular,that many other people are writing about b.are ones you feel strongly about and that can be backed up by outside sources c.are one you feel strongly about,whether or not there is outside evidence for support

Pl i ben trying and trying but i still cant get it. you are to write a five paragraph literary essay based on one of the 4 prompts and what you have read and learned in this module. these are your options: 1. how do the events of "the white umbrella" teach the narrator a lesson about shame and acceptance? 2. what role does creativity play in "the bat-poet"? 3. how does the character of squeaky change over the course of "raymond's run"? 4. discuss the influences of older family members on the protagonists and speakers in the stories and poems of this unit. you are to write a five paragraph literary essay based on what you have read and learned in this module. your final submission should meet the following requirements. • submit completed pre-writing and outline documents. • write an essay that contains an introduction with hook and thesis statement, supporting paragraphs with evidence and at least one quotation, and a conclusion that restates the thesis and reviews main points. • use transitions appropriate to the pattern of organization. • use vocabulary to create tone and voice. • cite primary source (quotation). • submit completed revision checklist. • vary sentence structure. • create sentences with parallel structures. • use technology in the writing process.