Redule serience.
derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees when he was thirty-seven years old in 2011 at yankee
stadium in the bronx.
which is the best way to revise this complex sentence?
in 2011, derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees at yankee stadium in the bronx. he was thirty-seven
years old.
in 2011, derek jeter notched his 3.000th hit for the new york yankees. at yankee stadium in the bronx, he was thirty-sever
years old.
derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees when he was thirty-seven years old playing at yankee
stadium. in the bronx
derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit at age thirty-seven. in the bronx at yankee stadium in 2011.