Venice was an interesting destination. you have to travel by boat. we toured a chandelier factory. the colored glass was incredible. we enjoyed the artwork in the museums. the museums were crowded with tourists. what is one important way to improve this paragraph? add sentence variety. place the last sentence first. the paragraph should be shorter. add a topic sentence.

Me read the letter. dear aunt mary, you for the wonderful painting. you are so talented! i was thrilled that you chose to paint horses. you must have remembered that i was crazy about horses when i was a little kid—and i still love them. i have hung the painting in my room so that i can see it every morning when i wake up. your loving niece, celia what makes this letter appropriate for its intended audience? it is written from the third-person point of view. it is concise and impersonal. its sentence structure is varied. its language is informal.

If this were a fictionalized account, instead of a memoir, which might be the opening sentence? a) i am not your prisoner. b) i find myself in prison. c) you have taken me prisoner. d) black hawk had been taken prisoner.

Is the book the outsiders a realistic story? plz explain. asap!