Based on their ideas and your own ideas about suspense, explain what you think is the most effective way to build suspense. Child's idea that suspense is created through delaying answers is the most effective way to create suspense. People can't help but want to know answers.

my original

Mystery is key to wanting to read more, making sure the reader is interested in the character having more and it'd mostly be about dangerous situations.

Explanation:

sample response: Child’s idea that suspense is created through delaying answers is the most effective way to create suspense. People can’t help but want to know answers. This is true whether or not they care about the people in the story. However, Child seems to think any unanswered questions create suspense, and I think the questions have to be about bad or dangerous situations.

these have to be in your own words

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.