Which transition in the paragraph should be revised?

Revise “for example” at the beginning of Sentence 2.
Revise “however” at the beginning of Sentence 3.
Revise “specifically” at the beginning of Sentence 4.
Revise “finally” at the beginning of Sentence 5.

Every customer that enters a sunfun retail location should be treated with kindness and respect. when someone comes in: 1. approach the customer and ask if he or she is looking for a specific item. a. if the answer is "yes," the customer find that item. b. if the answer is "no," let the customer know you're there to should the need arise. 2. if a customer has been browsing for about 15 minutes, respectfully check in again to see if he or she needs . 3. if a customer is holding clothing, ask if he or she would like you to set up a dressing room how is this section organized? by order of importance point by point compare and contrast step by step

Article 1: article 2: valido accused of accepting bribes unpopular conservative senator raymond valido (r-louisiana) stands accused of accepting more than $1 million in campaign donations from the nosco oil company in exchange for his efforts to pass a bill. the bill would allow the company to build a massive oil pipeline that will span the entire east coast of the us. senate colleagues on both sides of the aisle are demanding valido release his campaign finance reports. “if valido did accept these contributions from nosco, he essentially accepted a bribe and is now fulfilling his part of the bargain,” said senator michelle saud (d-new hampshire). the federal election commission saw no evidence of unlawful conduct in valido’s fundraising. however, if the senator did accept contributions in return for legislative favors, he may be censured by the senate. what is the reporter’s motive in article 1? what is the reporter’s motive in article 2? which term from senator nelson’s quote in article 2 is an example of bias?

Me this is due tomorrow and i'm having a hard time with the reading