(1) Hard work is also important because it can help you get your dream job. (2) For example, my sister always loved to travel and work with children. (3) Her dream job was to teach English in Korea. (4) She had to make many good impressions on certain people. (5) She took Korean classes and even volunteered for a tutoring program so she could practice working with young children. (6) My sister got one of the few available jobs because of her hard work.

Which sentence should be revised because it gives a detail that is not fully developed in this sample paragraph?

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we would need to be able to read the passage in question to determine which factor allowed david believe he could defeat goliath. post the passage, and i'd love to out.

vey information about pap? physical description beliefs actions interactions

the correct answer is: reveal gregor as an untidy individual.

in metamorphosis by franz kafka, gregor samsa is the main character, who one day wakes up as a bug, and the attitude he takes upon his transformation forces him to go deeper on his existence and the new features of his body.

in this excerpt the writer mentions a table full of collection textile samples, which gives us a hint about gregor being messy. later on the book we discover how he is a really untidy individual.