Take a look at the following arguments. People who break traffic rules should pay large fees when they receive tickets. People who break traffic rules should also have to pay large fees for protecting the safety of other drivers. Which sentence best revises the second argument to make it relevant to the first?

Original: "People who break traffic rules should also have to pay large fees for protecting the safety of other drivers."

You can do: "To protect the safety of other drivers, people who break traffic rules should pay large fees."

Explanation:

Make sure it is known the main reason for your argument is to PROTECT other drivers. It is not just to punish the ones commiting wrong, it makes a stronger case when you let it be known first.

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