I'd appreciate some help! Please tell me what you think of a rhyme I just thought up! (It's kind of like a song)

Tick tick tick, I'm alone all I got is this.
Tock tock tock goes the clock up on my wall.
Fix fix fix, nows there nothing else to be fixed.
What have I missed, I'm broken again and that's all.

Love love love, no-one wants someone like this.
Heart heart heart, no the hate won't make me fall.
Move move move, as I walk and talk again.
Make make make, me feel like I've done something wrong.