Breaks from the blue-black
skin of the water, dragging her shell
with its mossy scutes
across the shallows and through the rushes
and over the mudflats, to the uprise,
to the yellow sand,
to dig with her ungainly feet
a nest, and hunker there spewing
her white eggs down
into the darkness, and you think

—“The Turtle,”
Mary Oliver

Repetition is an important element to include in your free verse poem. Locate which word is repeated in three continuous phrases to show the slow, continued movement of the turtle in one direction.

A. laying
B. her
C. to
D. across

Break down the structure of the poem by completing each sentence.

The first stanza is mainly about

✔ the turtle's movement and actions

.

The second stanza is mainly about

✔ the reasons for the turtle's behavior

.

The third stanza is mainly about

✔ the turtle's connection to the rest of nature

Explanation:

i’m writing a memoir and i’ve been given the great suggestion of placing a ‘sub-narrative’ within some of the chapters – sort of, what was going on with me in the grand scheme of things.

i was wondering how to format this so that it is very obvious we are stepping out the of story.

firstly is a change in font from serif to sans workable? i also use dashes for a scene change. was thinking of using a different scene-changer too.

here’s a (shortened) example:

university – or what’s known as ‘uni’ in australia – were some of the best days of my life. where else do you get to potter around in a great location, have very little responsibility, learn lots of things, do lots of things and walk out four years later with a bonus – a degree!

with my university years i had immersed myself into community of intelligent ambitious people. generally everyone had a confidence about themselves. they knew where they were going in life and weren’t threatened by others.

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next normal paragraph continues here…

(sorry couldn’t show the fonts in this comment field)

too much?