Which best contrasts the way language is used in my story and "on the bus with rosa parks"?
a the memoir uses everyday language; the poem uses literary language.
b the memoir uses poetic language; the poem uses dialogue. c the memoir uses symbolic language; the poem uses legal language.
d the memoir uses short sentences; the poem uses long sentences.

Aspot in middle of the retina that only contains cones is called the

The story line remains the same. the kids live in what was then one of the remaining beachfront slums, down the coast from the expensive malibu area. the beach was ruled by surfers, but in the afternoon, when the waves died down, some of the surfers, or their younger brothers, fooled around on skateboards. one day, skip engblom, the shop owner, comes up with a key breakthrough, polyurethane wheels: "they grip." with the additional traction, the z-boys try skating the sides of the big, open drainage canal that runs through the area. then comes a brainstorm: because of a drought, the area's swimming pools were drained. the kids started "borrowing" pools when the owners weren't home, to skate the curved sides.” where did “the lords of dogtown” originally practice their tricks? a. the beach c. an open drainage canal b. empty pools d. none of these

Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can deepak do to strengthen his paper?