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Can you correct this paragraph? a football player once had a dream. the dream was about the queen of england. she was on a boat and was fishing. when she tried to put a worm on the fishing hook, her necklace fell into the water. a train conductor named maxwell threw popcorn in the water. the fish ate the popcorn then gave the queen her necklace. the queen said, ” you all for me get my necklace back! ” “you are welcome said the conductor and all the fish.

Which sentence you is an example of chronological structure in “the city without us”?

If you were making a persuasive speech about how students should take creative writing every year they are in school, which sentence would most effectively support that argument?