Susie has asked three of her classmates to peer edit her report on Air Force One, in which she used this sentence (8). She asked her friends to make recommendations for corrections. Which friend is right?
A) Susie is correct in thinking the passage is correct as is.
B) Joe is correct in suggesting the passage should be changed to the passive voice.
C) Latoya is correct in suggesting that enters be made plural to agree with the subject "Members".
D) Terrell is correct in suggesting that the prepositional phrase "in the news media" be set off by commas.

The answer is C.

Explanation:

I just answerded it on USATestPrep.

answer: this is not a good thesis statement because a thesis statement is not supposed to have questions in it. a thesis states your position on your topic. a question cannot state anything because it is not a statement. a question is a great lead in to a thesis, but it can't be the thesis.

explanation:

the silver bells of the sleds are merry and keep time in the winter nights while the sky twinkles happily. the golden bells of weddings are delightful in their peaceful happiness, foretelling a rapturous future. meanwhile, the brazen alarm bells scream frightfully in the night, with a discordant and desperate sound. in their clamor, these bells convey terror, horror, and anger. finally, the iron bells are solemn and melancholy, while those in the church steeple are like ghouls who feel happiness. the king of the ghouls, who rings the bells, cheerfully keeps time with the moaning and groaning bells.