How should Kirsten revise the email to improve the
organization of ideas?
Subject: Water Issue in Lower Dauphin County
Dear Senator Thomas,
Thank you for your hard work on behalf of the citizens of
our community. The purpose of this email is to bring the
issue of water quality to your attention. A state
commission could investigate this issue, document
problems, and suggest solutions if necessary.
Several citizens in Lower Dauphin County have reported
discolored water and foul smells coming from their
faucets. Personal water quality tests have found elevated
levels of lead in the water. Local officials have refused to
do further testing.
I did some research on the pipes in the area, and I could
not believe that they were so old! Some of them were
installed in 1910! I bet they are leaking lead! Further,
there have been complaints that a local welding company
may be dumping metals into the Choctaw River. The
company denied this to a local journalist.
by stating the solution of appointing a commission
after stating the problems
3 by writing in the last sentence that local officials
have refused to do testing, for emphasis
O by putting the reference to discolored water in the
first sentence to get the reader's attention
O by moving the complaints about the welding
company to the first sentence for emphasis

Read the excerpt from act 1 of a doll's house. helmer: nora! [goes up to her and takes her playfully by the ear.] the same little featherhead! suppose, now, that i borrowed fifty pounds today, and you spent it all in the christmas week, and then on new year's eve a slate fell on my head and killed me, and— nora: [putting her hands over his mouth]. oh! don't say such horrid things. helmer: still, suppose that happened, —what then? nora: if that were to happen, i don't suppose i should care whether i owed money or not. helmer: yes, but what about the people who had lent it? nora: they? who would bother about them? i should not know who they were. helmer: that is like a woman! but seriously, nora, you know what i think about that. no debt, no borrowing. there can be no freedom or beauty about a home life that depends on borrowing and debt. we two have kept bravely on the straight road so far, and we will go on the same way for the short time longer that there need be any struggle. nora: [moving towards the stove]. as you , torvald. how does the interaction between helmer and nora advance the plot? nora realizes that helmer will completely disapprove of her having borrowed money, so she has to continue to keep it a secret from him. nora realizes that she and helmer have the same ideas about financial issues, and the conversation brings them closer together later in the play. helmer realizes that nora is more responsible with money than he originally thought, and he trusts her more with finances later in the play. nora realizes that helmer knows a lot more about borrowing and lending, and she will seek his input later when she needs it.