Enrique's Journey and "The Children of the Drug Wars" by Sonia Nazario are both nonfiction texts about the dangerous journeys of immigrant children. What should be added to this thesis statement to make it stronger?

subtopics to be covered in the essay.

Explanation:

A thesis statement is one sentence that briefly (but precisely) describes the main claim of an essay. Ideally, it should also include the main topics that will be discussed in body paragraphs.

In this thesis statement, it is correctly stated that these two texts share the same theme. In order to make it even stronger, the author needs to mention the subtopics that will be elaborated later in the text. For instance, the migration which happens due to drug wars could be mentioned, as well as child immigration.

  plan: i will begin with a quotation about the importance of unity in a community. then, i will state my claim that an activity will unite our school by creating a shared vision, purpose, and direction. in the body, i will use three main points that describe the different avenues the students can take: through a variety of clubs, through a special event, or through an awareness week. i will provide evidence about other towns that have unity activities and the kinds of events that they include. pictures will illustrate my three main points in action. for the ending, i will restate the main idea in a new way and pose a question to keep the audience thinking. 

which of the following was specifically permitted by the emancipation proclamation?

free african americans were allowed to fight for the confederacy.

free african americans were allowed to enlist in the union army and navy.

enslaved people in border states were allowed to move to the north.

enslaved people in border states were allowed to become confederate citizens. nrg myjr i64gq3y45h5t5