Read the following paragraph that Elijah wrote about Lawton Allen, founder and president of Hope House, for his
blog series "Inspirational Stories":
More than 50 people have found jobs through this program. Mr. Allen was once homeless. You can take a career
class there and get help with a job search. Hope House was founded in March 2014. Did you know that they will
fit you for a suit so you can go to a job interview? The organization has nonprofit status, so most of the budget
can be spent helping people. Hope House is a place to go when you are down on your luck.
How could Elijah improve his writing?