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The Jellyfish species Cyanea capillata or, the lions mane jellyfish has been cited as the largest jellyfish for years, But the Nemopilema nomurai jellyfish has become increasingly common in the waters of Japan or Korea and now it is the closest to the lion's mane jellyfish in size. It is the only species in the monotypic genus nemopilema. Jellyfish are a type of zooplankton and some of them are parasitic and carnivorous.
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English, 21.06.2019 14:00
Asap which sentence features a correctly identified compound pronoun in a prepositional phrase? a.while waiting in line, sara stood near him and her. b.she and i will be at the park on tuesday, waiting for mariah and them. c.everyone is so sure that he'll be late after traveling with peter and maria. d.after they visit the grand canyon, tianna and mom are going to a spa.
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English, 21.06.2019 19:00
As it is used in section 1, what does unctuous mean? a) greasy or soapy b) soft or fragile c) traditional or elite d) hypocritical or insincere
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English, 22.06.2019 09:00
Answer quick 20 points how does penny baxter's view of the forresters differ from that of ma baxter's view after fodder-wing's death? a. penny views the forresters as foolish people, while ma baxter views them as heroes. b. penny is angry with the forresters, while ma baxter feels a connection to them. c. penny sees the forresters as criminals, while ma baxter thinks they are victims. d. penny feels sympathy for the forresters' loss, while ma baxter shows no respect for their loss.
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