Can you please edit this story by reflecting a deeper understanding of setting.

She looked lacking of energy
out on the front room window.
There he goes, she said to her
self and quickly turned away
from his sight she had been
dumped and dumped hard. He
told her he was in love with her
sister and they have been
seeing each other for weeks on the sly. Without seeming to tell a single soul.

a tiger who seemed to be strangely talking to a mouse near a huge tree. that is when i noticed that the tiger was weirdly hitting the bottom of the tree with his large paws, and to my amazement the tree seemed to open up to some underground

that is my idea for you to develop your story

happy to

pls mark as brainliest

a) madame podtochina used witchcraft to make it disappear.

the third one.

hope it

sorry forgo thte passage