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Good morning everyone, This is Jimin. At the moment, computers are deeply interacting with our daily life. It would be impossible to go your entire life without using a computer, which means computers are getting smarter such as machine intelligence. I am going to describe 2 examples of how machine intelligence will bring trouble to people’s lives.
First of all, Machine intelligence is bringing the red ocean to jobs containing tasks that can be automated, According to Jacky Liang, author of “Job Loss due to AI- how bad is it going to be? ”States “as many as 47 percents of current jobs containing tasks that may be automated will disappear,” This means big companies like google, apple… are going to makeawfully tons of money. This is how machine Intelligence will blow the middle class. Machine Intelligence is high efficiency itself because machine intelligence is high efficiency, big companies are going to replace Employees with machine intelligence like Amazon is replacing some workers at its fulfillment centers. “Amazon has considered installing two machines at dozens of more warehouses, removing at least 24 roles at each one, these people said.

These facilities typically employ more than 2,000 people. That would amount to more than 1,300 cuts across 55 U. S. fulfillment centers for standard-sized inventory. Amazon would expect to recover the costs in under two years, at $1 million per machine plus operational expenses, they said.”1) Losing a job by machine intelligence is not a future business anymore.
Secondly, Machine intelligence will change our way of life forever. From Jason Tasha, author of the article” Courts Are Using AI to Sentence Criminals. That Must Stop Now,”2) it says courts and corrections departments around the US use algorithms(machine intelligence ) to determine a defendant's "risk", which ranges from the probability that an individual will commit another crime to the likelihood a defendant will appear for his or her court date. The author used the word “risk” because Machine intelligence has a failure and that failure will make extensive choices that affect the lives of individuals. Machine intelligence will create thousands of bad rap.
In brief, Machine intelligence is bringing the red ocean to jobs containing tasks that can be automated, it will create thousands of bad rap, but our responsibility is to judge one another as human to human and use algorithms within that framework and bring happiness to all people Borrowing words from Zeynep Tufekci's statement. Machine intelligence is here. That means we must hold on ever tighter to human values and human ethics.3)