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If one writes logically, he will prove his point. is this sentence correct or contains an unwarranted shift in person?

In the poem, collins compares his love to a pigeon on a generals head

[v]ast numbers of our people are compelled to seek their livelihood by begging, robbing, stealing, cheating, flattering, suborning, forswearing, forging . . which satirical element is most dominant in the passage above?