What is the main purpose of this speech? To enrage the crowd
To make new demands
To provide a change
To show respect

answer: this is not a good thesis statement because a thesis statement is not supposed to have questions in it. a thesis states your position on your topic. a question cannot state anything because it is not a statement. a question is a great lead in to a thesis, but it can't be the thesis.

i love this article you wrote. it is intresting and i was convinced by it. at the ending you could say something like this, "support robots today if you agree." but so far so good. you did an awesome job : ).

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i think you should write from the heart and think what truely makes a hero. i can’t do this for you. even though this is it’s up to you.