Could I please get feedback for my essay on The Tempest (Grade 10, English)

Explanation:

The content and vocabulary of this response is grade level. You should try to include better transitions when mentioning certain events in "The Tempest". Lastly, your conclusion should be a symposis of what you wrote not just a claim. Expand furthmore on the deeper meaning of the abuse of power and superiority. P.S. make sure to put all citations from the text in parentheses as it would be easier for the reader to see your citation.

a simile is first defined as a type of speech that uses one thing or phrase with comparisons to things of an unrelated kind, often in order to make a more vivacious description. so of the phrases above, only the last one (i swear she cast a shadow white as stone) would be considered a simile, as a shadow white as stone takes two unrelated things and uses them in an interesting way.

explanation:

mark brainliest and have a great day!

i guess you are missing the idea that has to be supported, am i right?