Is this good that i did (the first page)

In my opinion, I think you did a good job.

Explanation:

That's all.

Hope this helps.

Also, I would indent if I wrote it.

it u understand what he thought at the time and let u know more about him then what third person would of known probably. hope this : )

the correct answer is b. in order to explain a point clearly in an essay, it is always better to include a clear example of your ideas. including an scenario in which a family is affected by consumerism will support your argument as well as supporting details, such as quotations from experts and statistics. option a could be correct, but statistics and quotations are supporting ideas rather than clear explanations. choices c and d are simply inadequate. they do not add information about the effects of consumerism, rather they are strategies for engaging the reader