Which revision makes the tone of the sentence appropriate for a formal e-mail? Please review our suggestion for paving over the muddy area where students wait before school. You know, you should consider paving over the area where we wait before school because it’s gross. Please note our awesome suggestion for paving over the gross area where we wait before school. Paving over that muddy area where students wait before school is obviously a smart plan.

Please review our suggestion for paving over the muddy area where students wait before school.

Explanation:

This revision is the most formal and respectful. The second one is very forward and informal, the third one uses too many adjectives like awesome, which is not formal. The last one sounds okay until they use obviously, which is very forward and disrespectful.

he is a confident leader.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)